100 WC week #24

One day on a cold Winters day. My family and I decided to go to the snow. On the way there the ride in the plane was peaceful. Nothing Disturbing us. At the snow we went skiing and snowboarding. Since it was are first time there, we had to take lessons. At the end of the week on the last day, we had a family skiing day. It was lots of fun. On the last day we had to take are hired ski gear back. We we boarded the plane. Then when I looked out of the plane window I…

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  1. A very fluent and enjoyable piece of writing, Will. A great mixture of sentences and excellent punctuation. It’s always good to leave the reader wanting more. Well done!

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